Matt Bellamy

Hi canopy! As someone who also loves playing with line breaks and indents, the format of this piece really spoke to me. I like how the decisions you make about ...

Hi Starryy! Firstly, I'm very sorry to see that this is a true story. That must have been so difficult for you, and perhaps also difficult to write about, so ...

Hello! This is a very striking poem, firstly because I don't see right-justified poems rather than left-justified very often. I wonder why you chose that, and it's interesting what it ...

I agree with Cats, there is lots of potential here! The poem flows really well. The rhyming is simple but doesn't feel forced. In fact, I think this could also ...

Hi Toast! I really like the way you have set out this poem, with each colour of the sunset having a different section. My favourite section is the first one, ...

Hi EvalisseRae! Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I wasn't sure what it was going to be about, and then halfway through the message became clear. I quite ...

I'm trying to think of what to say but my brain keeps saying "oh that's so weird" over and over, but in a good way! I love reading these sorts ...

Hi Genevieve! Thank you for sharing this essay on such a personal topic. I can see throughout the essay how important your religion is to you and you describe really ...

Hi Persy! It's been a very long time since I've reviewed anything, but I will give this my best effort! I really like the first three stanzas of this poem ...

Hi! This is a pretty cool poem. It's quite an original idea, and it makes me wonder where the character has to go after getting off the swing. I think ...

I quite like this. I think the repetition you use in places is very effective, though I think the "ever" at the end sounds a bit out of place. Maybe ...

Haha, awesome! Very satirical, and I can absolutely relate, particularly the part about the less experience you have the more likely you'll retain the position. It's a vicious cycle isn't ...

I think you probably have the emotion to make this into a good poem, but at the moment it seems to fall a bit flat. It doesn't flow very well ...

Hello! This is a lovely song, with lots of emotion, and I really like it. It's a good, original idea, too. Just remember to proofread because in some places you ...

Ooh, I like this! It needs a bit of cleaning up but I think your rhyming for the most part is good and it lends a nice tone to it, ...